wow! the one on the right is awesome!! i think you really have changed by your art!proof these two pictures!! the left one is good for a beginner drawer the second one wow!! that one looks great!!!!! i love the background the girl herself looks awesome even if on her own!! i love her eyes and her cloths! she has a nice belt and shoes and collar! personnel i think you should be proud of yourself because of the second piece!! i have to say they both look great but personal the after one is a lot better than the second.